Some rendered designs that i showed in the small class critique. Lee enjoyed the rhetorical meaning that the moth drawn to the flame had. We also showed her through some of the other rhetoric thumbnails i had in my work. We came to the conclusion that it was going to be more effective if we ditched our character idea through our work and focus more on visual rhetoric that were showing through in the sketches we had done. In particular the pulling together guitar string ideas. I will explore this in preparation for the critique on Monday.
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